Jono - that is stunning - far better comp and the tyre lines create a wonderful lead in - I quite like the open space to the left but see Stewarts point and it's a 50/50 choice to me. Maybe clone out the dead tree at the 3 O'Clock position.
That aside this is a 101% improvement of the previous shot - and that one was damn good.
Well captured Jono - superb ~ John