Certainly the principal of "Stop Motion" (shutter speed) is displayed but the shots appear to be suffering from camera shake (??) - looking at the fencing wire is what suggests it to me.
Without camera shake the 2nd shot especially could look good.....
Oh!....and that red border...............
(well in my opinion anyway - and thats from a bloke who suffered the insults / comments from others for frames & matte I have used / experimented with for a
Lllllooonngg time!!)
John