Robin No.9

C+C Welcome.

Oh and before anyone mentions her bra pattern showing through her t-shirt I have mentioned to her that she get some plain ones for the next shoot.

i'm not sure Stewart, some men find that quite provocative, i'd be more concerned that the red shirt wasn't doing much for her colouring, some women just don't suit the colour, (i'm one of them) although red in photos are usually eye catching. nice pose and the lighting is perfect

She chose her clothes and these shots were just a test run for a future shoot.

I needed to see how she looked on camera and to assess her posing skills.
She was a little wooden to start but soon got into the spirit of things.
Now I have the studio lights we can get round to doing a proper shoot.

Nice upper pose, to me the slight 'slouch' distracts for the overall quality of the pose.
The red tends to dominate but beyond that this has some very good elements.
Nice smile, great camera to eye contact and exposure.
Be careful of background elements - the branch growing through the shoulder for example.
Good work both of you - great to see ~ John

Personally, I don't thing she needs bra at all. Like the crop n colors, but you could have used a more shallow DOF with larger apertures, so the background is not so distracting. Waiting for the rest...