Number of posts : 209 Age : 62 Location : Portsmouth England Occupation : Accounts Administrator Registration date : 2007-07-22
Subject: Stairway to Heaven Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:02 pm
Loved this shot thought it different
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Subject: Re: Stairway to Heaven Fri Sep 14, 2007 9:06 am
The exposure is fine and it is sharp but it needs the path to be more prominent.
If you had framed it so the path was central in the frame and it lead the eye up to the top where there might have been a bench (can't remember) it would have been a lot stronger compositionally.
byteme Admin
Number of posts : 3217 Age : 69 Location : Cornwall, UK Registration date : 2007-02-04
Subject: Re: Stairway to Heaven Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:40 am
Well observed Diz but I must agree with the Old Man - the path is too far to the left leaving dead space to the right. I can see you maybe aimed to keep the coloured bush in the frame for contrast of colour but (sadly) its not "quite" come off.
Hey ho! some yer win - some you..............
John
Dizzy Piglet Enthusiast
Number of posts : 209 Age : 62 Location : Portsmouth England Occupation : Accounts Administrator Registration date : 2007-07-22
Subject: Re: Stairway to Heaven Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:46 am
Thanks guys for the comment and instruction i might just go back and try again and yes John i was trying to keep the bush in but it didn't work, ah well im still learning lol
byteme Admin
Number of posts : 3217 Age : 69 Location : Cornwall, UK Registration date : 2007-02-04
Subject: Re: Stairway to Heaven Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:47 am
Sharon you certainly are learning and doing a wonderful job - keep going, your work is so often inspired ~ John
Dizzy Piglet Enthusiast
Number of posts : 209 Age : 62 Location : Portsmouth England Occupation : Accounts Administrator Registration date : 2007-07-22
Subject: Re: Stairway to Heaven Fri Sep 14, 2007 11:18 am
Thank you John for the lovely comment im certainly enjoying this photography lark more than i expected, looking at yours and all the other photographs is inspiring, i wanted to learn how to use a camera properly as im off on the QE2 next year to Norway and there are some lovely sceans there which i would like to try and capture.
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