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PostSubject: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeSat Mar 31, 2007 10:13 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeSun Apr 01, 2007 4:02 pm

Gotta be honest Jono this one don't work for me - the idea and comp are sound enough but the silhoutte of the dog is maybe too harsh?? Sorry pal ~ John
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PostSubject: Re: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeSun Apr 01, 2007 8:35 pm

I agree with John about the composition not working.

It needs a crop to put the dog in the bottom left intersection and a jump in the saturation to give it some colour. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeSun Apr 01, 2007 8:47 pm

Thanks, I will give that a try
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PostSubject: Re: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeSun Apr 01, 2007 11:02 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeMon Apr 02, 2007 10:31 am

Most people would have said bottom right intersection but putting the dog in the left has made the viewer wonder what the dog has got his eye on.
It has given it some interest to the viewer.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayling   Hayling Icon_minitimeMon Apr 02, 2007 3:28 pm

like the new crop better...lots of texture to this image.
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