Lovetullys
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Griz
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| Subject: Re: Here's Buddy !!  Mon Oct 22, 2007 5:30 am | |
| Beautiful Chocolate Lab!
#1 is a great profile, the simplicity of the background really make him the focus.
#2, focus is good, DOF is good, but the lack of eye contact, makes him look vacant.
Maybe if you reworked the eyes, especially the near side one, so you can see the pupil it would help.
I had a Chocolate Lab/Great Pierenese (sp?) named Buster
Buddy reminds me of him.
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Lovetullys
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| | Subject: Re: Here's Buddy !! Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:08 am | |
| Thanks Griz, he's a great dog. His temperment is awesome..always happy and wagging his tail. He's a house guest right now, he's been here since July. | |
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sassy
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| | Subject: Re: Here's Buddy !! Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:43 pm | |
| these are great kathy, your center of focus is very slightly off (see how his eyes and neck are spot on but the nose is slightly blurred? in shot#1) just a slight movement to the right would get that spot on, a great profile shot though, #2 i agree with Griz the eyes are where you need to have focus and contact, you're getting better though  | |
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Lovetullys
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| | Subject: Re: Here's Buddy !! Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:46 pm | |
| Thanks Sharon appreciate your comments  | |
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