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PostSubject: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2007 12:01 pm

this is my granddaughter
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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2007 1:36 pm

Susan, great picture. The colors are great, her skin tones are perfect.
Nice focus on her beautiful eyes !! You have a Beautiful granddaughter.
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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2007 5:58 pm

Sue a beautiful portrait of a lovely young lady. You've done very well here.
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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2007 6:00 pm

Well Sue - you told me some time ago your ambition was to take a "WOW" photo - this one of Jade certainly hits the mark eh??

Super portrait.............. jade 169474

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PostSubject: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2007 6:09 pm

Thank you for your comments on my photo and of my granddaughter i think she is pretty special but then i am bias . The hard bit is done now i think the first post was always going to be the hardest the only way is up now !! jade Orkest
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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2007 11:08 pm

Very nice, the composition is wonderful and her eyes are captivating! Excellent portrait.

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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2007 10:43 am

The pose and expression are superb as is the exposure.

I like the idea of using a background that reflects something of the sitters life, whether in her own home or yours, but it is a little too fussy and there are a few things that catch the viewers eye.
The mirror and wall light for one and the reflections off of the wine bottles are another.

If you can redo this at some point try moving the camera to the right to lose the back room and mirror, also lose the wine rack (it is your place is not Sue?) and when the subject is positioned place the family photos, in the frames, where they will be in view to add to the sense of family.

A very nice first post but as I say it could be improved and that is what we are here for isn't it? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2007 11:53 am

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I agree with everything you have said and thank-you, again this photo is as i took it, i have done some things differantly to try out but i am going to try out your ideas and who knows might even post version 2.
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PostSubject: Re: jade   jade Icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2007 11:40 pm

That is what we started this place for, to get meaningful critique and have a laugh. Very Happy
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